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love song attempt

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when will i see you                                        when will i see you
after that night you're still on my mind                   after that night you're still on my mind
as a smell of something sweet                              as a smell of something sweet
something i want to keep                                   something i want to keep
like a forbidden treat                                     like a forbidden treat
right there in the corner of my eye                        right there in the corner of my eye
but too far to reach                                       but too far to reach

you are mine to find                                       you are mine to find
twined in my mind                                          twined in my mind
where you are                                              where you are
as perfect as you can be                                   as perfect as you can be

the world will stop                                        the world will stop
until i'm with you                                         until i'm with you
there is no other way it can be                            there is no other way it can be  
it's me and you, my heart says i do                        it's me and you, my heart says i do
can you hear it shouts?                                    can you hear it shouts?  
that's how its suppoused to be                             that's how its suppoused to be      
just you and me                                            just you and me

when will i see you                                        two bodies, one soul
after that night you're still on my mind                   divided into  two
as a smell of something sweet                              you
something i want to keep                                   and me.
like a forbidden treat                                  
right there in the corner of my eye                                    
but too far to reach                                  

now you are here                                  
in front of me                                  
so close, so real                                  
the thing i yearn to feel                                  
baby, its you and me.                                  
this is my attempt at a love song. what do you guys think?
and which one of the versions do you like more?

as always criticism and comments are welcome. hope you like it
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